Banks! We know you consider yourself funny. You dont't have to prove it all the time. How about you hire an editor and cut a bit on the mid-dialogue exposition? Like, we don't exactly need four pages of that. And don't even get me started on abrupt endings, I already reas Look to Windwards.
Enjoyable and fantastic, but I have read this before. And way overlength. 3/5
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